Comments on: PREMONITION By: Jamie Eyberg http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/ Sun, 12 Feb 2012 06:07:52 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Sam Manzanares http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-6764 Sam Manzanares Sat, 19 Sep 2009 03:35:32 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-6764 Wow I really loved it. Mrs. Jackson told me that your stories would be perfect for me to read, she was right. Wow I really loved it. Mrs. Jackson told me that your stories would be perfect for me to read, she was right.

]]> By: Alan W. Davidson http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-5344 Alan W. Davidson Sat, 25 Jul 2009 13:57:09 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-5344 Raul's outlook on fate was chilling and "spot on" on his child mind. Great story, Jamie. Raul’s outlook on fate was chilling and “spot on” on his child mind.
Great story, Jamie.

]]> By: Jamie Eyberg http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-326 Jamie Eyberg Thu, 26 Feb 2009 20:16:10 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-326 Thank you, everyone, for the kind words. Thank you, everyone, for the kind words.

]]> By: dj barber http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-324 dj barber Thu, 26 Feb 2009 00:28:12 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-324 Great flash, Jamie. Liked Raul's coldness towards things--seemed real for someone who might've dreamed far worse. --dj Great flash, Jamie. Liked Raul’s coldness towards things–seemed real for someone who might’ve dreamed far worse.

–dj

]]> By: Carrie Harris http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-320 Carrie Harris Wed, 25 Feb 2009 17:39:43 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-320 I particularly love the ending, and the hint that it too is unchangeable and preordained in some strange way. I particularly love the ending, and the hint that it too is unchangeable and preordained in some strange way.

]]> By: Cate http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-319 Cate Wed, 25 Feb 2009 16:07:04 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-319 Fabulous, Jamie. And you used one of my favourite words - Vesuvius. Fabulous, Jamie. And you used one of my favourite words - Vesuvius.

]]> By: Lori Titus http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/02/25/premonition-by-jamie-eyberg/#comment-316 Lori Titus Wed, 25 Feb 2009 07:26:39 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=436#comment-316 Excellent: creepy, unexpected, and chilling. I think he's not just predicting things, he's causing them.... Excellent: creepy, unexpected, and chilling. I think he’s not just predicting things, he’s causing them….

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