Comments on: TOO MUCH OF A GOOD THING By: Jimmy Calabrese http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/ Sun, 12 Feb 2012 16:36:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Cody http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-50891 Cody Thu, 16 Dec 2010 16:57:59 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-50891 Awesome story! I love how leave the REAL conclusion up to the reader. keep em coming! Awesome story! I love how leave the REAL conclusion up to the reader. keep em coming!

]]> By: Tony http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-6498 Tony Tue, 08 Sep 2009 15:30:02 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-6498 For such a short story the character development was very nice. Although I do not know the name of the man you speak of, I feel close to him at the end of your short. I also like how you included a protagonist and the antagonist inside of one character. Perhaps something longer in the future. For such a short story the character development was very nice. Although I do not know the name of the man you speak of, I feel close to him at the end of your short. I also like how you included a protagonist and the antagonist inside of one character.

Perhaps something longer in the future.

]]> By: Jenny http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4789 Jenny Fri, 10 Jul 2009 18:55:13 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4789 I liked your short story!!! Very different and very good!! Do you have any other ones that you are working on at the moment? I liked your short story!!!
Very different and very good!!
Do you have any other ones that you are working on at the moment?

]]> By: Brian Barnett http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4706 Brian Barnett Wed, 08 Jul 2009 14:04:45 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4706 Good stuff, Jimmy! Keep them coming. Good stuff, Jimmy! Keep them coming.

]]> By: Jimmy http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4681 Jimmy Tue, 07 Jul 2009 23:45:31 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4681 Thanks guys, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks guys, I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

]]> By: Bob Eccles http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4677 Bob Eccles Tue, 07 Jul 2009 22:38:33 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4677 Good story! I enjoyed it! Good story! I enjoyed it!

]]> By: Melissamarie http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4669 Melissamarie Tue, 07 Jul 2009 20:15:35 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4669 I conquer with Lori, the last line is the real clincher :) I like this one better than the last one that was posted by Jimmy. Good job. I conquer with Lori, the last line is the real clincher :) I like this one better than the last one that was posted by Jimmy. Good job.

]]> By: Lori Titus http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/07/07/too-much-of-a-good-thing-by-jimmy-calabrese/#comment-4646 Lori Titus Tue, 07 Jul 2009 05:07:26 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=997#comment-4646 The real clincher is the very last line.... :) The real clincher is the very last line…. :)

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