Comments on: CREEPY CRAWLY: By Jodi MacArthur http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/ Sun, 12 Feb 2012 07:30:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Suzie Bradshaw http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6804 Suzie Bradshaw Sun, 20 Sep 2009 16:26:06 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6804 That was fantastic! Ultra creepy...loved it. Love the description and dialogue. You nailed it. Thank you! That was fantastic! Ultra creepy…loved it. Love the description and dialogue. You nailed it. Thank you!

]]> By: Erin Cole http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6707 Erin Cole Thu, 17 Sep 2009 04:19:44 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6707 That would be one of my worst nightmares - Grandmother Spider! That last sentence horrific - and great character depth - <em>I smelled tobacco and cynicism on his breath. </em>. I had no idea what was really going to come out of that hole until later, which fueled the suspense in this. Nice work Jodi ~ That would be one of my worst nightmares - Grandmother Spider! That last sentence horrific - and great character depth - I smelled tobacco and cynicism on his breath. .
I had no idea what was really going to come out of that hole until later, which fueled the suspense in this.
Nice work Jodi ~

]]> By: Absolutely*Kate http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6664 Absolutely*Kate Tue, 15 Sep 2009 15:25:47 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6664 OMG - Ol'Joe's loose and lookin' down all the scary holes that critter, scarier than a creature from a nightmare herself, herself, Jodi MacAUTHOR can scare up ... DAMN! I want to read more . . . but there's something in my eye -- OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! OMG - Ol’Joe’s loose and lookin’ down all the scary holes that critter, scarier than a creature from a nightmare herself, herself, Jodi MacAUTHOR can scare up …

DAMN! I want to read more . . . but there’s something in my eye — OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

]]> By: Jodi MacArthur http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6644 Jodi MacArthur Tue, 15 Sep 2009 00:41:33 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6644 Um...bug spray anyone? Um…bug spray anyone?

]]> By: Jodi MacArthur http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6642 Jodi MacArthur Tue, 15 Sep 2009 00:34:08 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6642 Thanks for reading everyone! Thanks for reading everyone!

]]> By: Graeme Reynolds http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6635 Graeme Reynolds Mon, 14 Sep 2009 20:58:13 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6635 Damn that was a good story, gave me the shivers! I won't be investigating any big holes anytime soon and I will blame you if I have nightmares about spiders eating my eyes tonight! Damn that was a good story, gave me the shivers! I won’t be investigating any big holes anytime soon and I will blame you if I have nightmares about spiders eating my eyes tonight!

]]> By: Barry J. Northern http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6633 Barry J. Northern Mon, 14 Sep 2009 20:05:42 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6633 This was a joy to read, such lively dialog and beautiful turns of phrase. I think I liked the creepy description of the life-cycle of the Eysin the best, that and Ol' Joe saying his weeds were full of sin and needed flipping. This was a joy to read, such lively dialog and beautiful turns of phrase. I think I liked the creepy description of the life-cycle of the Eysin the best, that and Ol’ Joe saying his weeds were full of sin and needed flipping.

]]> By: Chad Case http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6630 Chad Case Mon, 14 Sep 2009 18:31:25 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6630 This was a great story, Jodi! I loved it! This was a great story, Jodi! I loved it!

]]> By: Angel Zapata http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6623 Angel Zapata Mon, 14 Sep 2009 14:53:05 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6623 I'm itchy all over. "spindly legs slip out" did it for me. Great story, Jodi. Um, I'm writing this with my eyes shut tight... I’m itchy all over. “spindly legs slip out” did it for me. Great story, Jodi. Um, I’m writing this with my eyes shut tight…

]]> By: Laura Eno http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6621 Laura Eno Mon, 14 Sep 2009 12:33:09 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6621 Great story, Jodi! Loved the last line... Great story, Jodi! Loved the last line…

]]> By: Laurita http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6620 Laurita Mon, 14 Sep 2009 11:44:48 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6620 Blaaaaaahhh! I got cold shivers all over reading this. I love how you told this from the victim's point of view. Damn, girl. You rock! Blaaaaaahhh! I got cold shivers all over reading this. I love how you told this from the victim’s point of view. Damn, girl. You rock!

]]> By: Paul D. Brazill http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6618 Paul D. Brazill Mon, 14 Sep 2009 10:11:23 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6618 Yep, the real deal. Good dialogue and beautifully written. Yep, the real deal. Good dialogue and beautifully written.

]]> By: Michael J. Solender http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6615 Michael J. Solender Mon, 14 Sep 2009 08:43:17 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6615 OOH!! Very Creepy - in the best possible way. Nice tempo here and great payoff... OOH!! Very Creepy - in the best possible way. Nice tempo here and great payoff…

]]> By: Jodi MacArthur http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6612 Jodi MacArthur Mon, 14 Sep 2009 06:17:23 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6612 Thanks Lori! Thanks Lori!

]]> By: Lori Titus http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/09/14/creepy-crawly-by-jodi-macarthur/#comment-6611 Lori Titus Mon, 14 Sep 2009 05:24:55 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=1528#comment-6611 Wow. That last paragraph is the clincher! Wow. That last paragraph is the clincher!

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