Comments on: 9 TO 5: By John Pupo http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 19:29:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: KjM http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-10577 KjM Fri, 01 Jan 2010 20:13:32 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-10577 Cold, cold, cold. The deadpan humor works very well in this. Well done. Cold, cold, cold.

The deadpan humor works very well in this. Well done.

]]> By: Jodi MacArthur http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8741 Jodi MacArthur Sat, 21 Nov 2009 22:47:04 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8741 I love the listing in the third sentence. Chat, interview - TEARING FLESH APART - all the same to me. Nice crunch in the end. I think you've been listening to those rice crispies a little too closely, John! I love the listing in the third sentence. Chat, interview - TEARING FLESH APART - all the same to me. Nice crunch in the end. I think you’ve been listening to those rice crispies a little too closely, John!

]]> By: Mary Ulrich http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8700 Mary Ulrich Sat, 21 Nov 2009 01:38:20 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8700 Scary stuff. Gheesh! Scary stuff. Gheesh!

]]> By: Slim http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8680 Slim Fri, 20 Nov 2009 15:49:51 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8680 A delectable serving of scare. A delectable serving of scare.

]]> By: Laurel Wilczek http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8678 Laurel Wilczek Fri, 20 Nov 2009 14:47:57 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8678 I like the flat humor in this. Very nice ending. Ravenne I like the flat humor in this. Very nice ending.

Ravenne

]]> By: Jim Wisneski http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8673 Jim Wisneski Fri, 20 Nov 2009 13:16:46 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8673 Rice krispies? I love the comparison. . . comparing his "normal" job to "normal" life. Great story! Jim Rice krispies? I love the comparison. . . comparing his “normal” job to “normal” life.

Great story!

Jim

]]> By: Marilyn http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8652 Marilyn Thu, 19 Nov 2009 17:46:40 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8652 Good creepy piece. I like the ending. Good creepy piece. I like the ending.

]]> By: Marisa Birns http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8650 Marisa Birns Thu, 19 Nov 2009 16:44:08 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8650 All in a day's work, eh? Frightening in his dispassion... well done! All in a day’s work, eh?

Frightening in his dispassion… well done!

]]> By: Laura Eno http://flashesinthedark.com/2009/11/19/9-to-5-by-john-pupo/#comment-8647 Laura Eno Thu, 19 Nov 2009 12:27:38 +0000 http://flashesinthedark.com/?p=2184#comment-8647 Lovely little stream of consciousness piece, John! I like the 9 to 5 aspect of his killing. I wonder what he does in his down time? Great story! Lovely little stream of consciousness piece, John! I like the 9 to 5 aspect of his killing. I wonder what he does in his down time? Great story!

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